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I was immediately drawn to viewing this image when I first saw its' notification. I was struck by its amazing ambiance yet expository e...


Damn, all of the best pieces on this site always come from you, and this piece is absolutely no exception! This is one of the few piece...

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I don't usually do critiques of art from franchises that I'm not interested in, but this is definitely a piece that stands out. The onl...

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You definitely see some choppy drawing in this piece, but other than the saber-toothed tiger, it's just not easily recognizable. The on...

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I was immediately drawn to viewing this image when I first saw its' notification. I was struck by its amazing ambiance yet expository epicness. The only thing that I have against it is that unexplained featureless monoliths of any type on any extraterrestrial body is an overused concept in science fiction. Thus it doesn't do so well in originality. However, the concept of an explorer coming upon it without a space suit is pretty cool, so it does pretty well as far as vision goes. Keep up the amazing work, and I hope to critique more amazing works from you in the future!
Damn, all of the best pieces on this site always come from you, and this piece is absolutely no exception! This is one of the few pieces I've reviewed that gets five stars in every category, and for good reason. I like what you've done with your universe in this piece, which is expanding it from cat and Yoruba clothed lizard men to more human-like races such as dwarves, and maybe some non-evil elves in the future. This piece also has one of the best lighting treatments I've ever seen on an artwork with the candles and bar lights, and also possibly the best improvements on a preexisting piece with the racial developments. I also see that Enorach has a female admirer! :) Anyway, I hope to see more amazing pieces from you in the future.
I don't usually do critiques of art from franchises that I'm not interested in, but this is definitely a piece that stands out. The only reason that vision isn't at a five is that I there's a lot of art for this particular character, and the background is what you would expect, which also takes away from its' originality. However, the impact and technique are some of the best I've ever seen from this franchise, and that surely gets a 5/5. Like I said before, this piece really stands out from the others, and this is definitely one of the best pieces I've seen from you as far as a drawing goes. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more work as good as this from you in the future.
If you had the ability to go back in time to record things about these people's culture/knowledge/history that in real life were never recorded, what would you pick?

A.) A Noaide(shaman) of the Saami people.

B.) Pre-Christian druids from the ancient Britons, Picts, Welsh, and Irish.

C.) An Ona oceanic navigator. (This one is my pick.)

Leave you answer in the comments below.

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cyborgBLUE Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2017  Hobbyist
:yoda: For the :+fav:, Thank you! ... :jedi:
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ARVEN92 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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Thanks for even more faves!
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Thanks for the faves and the watch 
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Thank you so much for the watch and the favs!  
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SO MANY FAVES.  Thanks so much!
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Thanks for yet another fave!
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Thank you for the favorites :3 It's greatly appreciated!
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